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From: Ronin <msimmons@bcgroup.net>
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Date: Monday, 23 March, 1998 4:25
Subject: [FFML][R1/2] Oil & Water (Part VI)

A Ranma 1/2 fanfic by Ronin.  All characters herein are property of
Takahashi Rumiko, and are used only because the author is a lazy butt

and

couldn't come up with an original character if his life depended on

it...

If you enjoy this story, please, e-mail me at msimmons@bcgroup.net.

This

and other fics of mine can be found at http://ronin.anime-manga.net

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{Snip!}

I felt that if Shampoo was going to take off, Cologne would be less

than

pleased, seeing as how she has always wanted Shampoo to marry Ranma and
carry out the Amazon law.  This would boost Cologne's own reputation.
However, Shampoo has her own desires, and I think the guts to carry

them

out.

Agreed.

Although I can't imagine Shampoo wanting to kill Ranko.
That part of your story comes across as extremely contrived.

Although how she is going to track down Ranko and Ryoga, the eternal
Lost Boy?  You'll just have to read Part VII to find out!

Some sort of magic or just sheer persistence.  You've already
given the required clues.

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