At 08:28 PM 3/15/98 -0800, Azusa wrote:

Authors notes:
This is my second fanfic of length.  I'm starting out feeling
very confident and optimistic, which scares me. =)  

There's a nice tone to it. =) It's a pleasant read; a tad
unpolished, but the rough edges will be cleared up with practice.

Your writing shows promise - keep at it!

I'm looking forward to the next installment.

-CW


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Christopher Willmore      http://qlink.queensu.ca/~4cw6/2096a.htm
Joel Mokyr's description of a successful inventor:
               "A crackpot hit the jackpot."
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