NdokaSaotm <NdokaSaotm@aol.com> wrote:

l've Got That Old Sinking Feeling
By Anita Williams

A truly titanic tale! :-)

It's a little heavy on explanations as opposed to descriptions. Giving
the reader a better mental picture of the scene would help them
appreciate the joke at the end.

Apostrophe-s is a possessive; fiancee`s and hentai's should be fiancees
and hentais. And "iceberg" has an e, not a u.

No, I wouldn't normally spend this much effort analyzing a spamfic. I'm
bored. :-)


Gary Kleppe
http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe/comics