I was thrown off a little by Ranma's last enocounter with Kunou.  After
what happened with the Tendous he's still willing to use his powers to
'fix' people's minds?  At the very least it seems like he'd try to start
small, if this really is necessary to make it possible to restore the
Tendous to their base state.  I dunno.  This just stuck out to me as not

so

much impossible but just not explained enough.

One of the things future parts will deal with is that Ranma DOES try to
solve problems through his powers. His ambivalence to doing this will
continue to decrease.  Unfortunately, as Part 4 will show, he won't
always be 100% successful.

The various Nabiki and Akane scenes were well-done...Kasumi will have to

be

dealt with quickly, though.  Will be interested to see how this is worked

out.

Next 2 parts will be heavily Kasumi-oriented.

And now Ryouga.  Oy.  While the premise of this fic requires that the
Tendous' condition remain unfixed for a while, it seems like Kunou hasn't
been really resolved at this point...it's your story, but if it were me

I'd

feel uncomfortable about having to balance yet another story thread at

this

point.  And if I were Ranma I'd have a nervous breakdown.

Indeed.  Part 3 will have, like Part 2, two major threads.  One will be
Ranma vs. Ryouga, the other will be Kasumi and Kunou.

Thanks!

--Sean Gaffney
--evil hentai mc guy