Hi,

This is my revised version and I'm verry happy with it. AND I WON'T GIVE
UP WRITING UNTIL I MAKE A GOOD SOLID FIC! Thank you!


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R E V I S E D

Note from the author:

I'm telling you, this fanfic Is somewhat Hentai and very much into
SailorMoon bashing. In my opinion, the only good sereis were SM, SMR,
and SMS. After that It went down hill. Only People that have strong
stomache's and a hentai urge should read this Fic. And this lemon fanfic
will be much better then my Shin Dumb Shojos.


Sluttish Senshi: Chapter 1 (revised version!)

It was night time, Usagi could hear the sounds of some distant cars
coming home from work. The house was silent, except for the soft talking
of Haruka and Michiru in their room. Usagi was curled up in a ball,
pillow tucked close to her to simulate Mamoru, her love. She was alone
that night. No mamoru to lean up against her and whisper in her ear..

Usagi laid sprawled out on her bed, her mind drifting. A tear appeared
in her eyes, for Mamoru could not fufill her needs. He was always busy,
and she used to wait and wait. Her legs spred wide open, exposing her
moist virgin, pink pussy. Usagi took her 2 fingers and began tracing the
outerwalls of it making a huge wet spot on her bunny bedspred, that
didn't satisfy her urge though, she grabbed her breasts and began
rubbing harder and faster for her hormones will flaring up again.
Suddenly, the urge came on to her like a wave crashing down. Her nipples
hardened and she let out a soft moan.

Usagi quickly got up from bed, trying to hide her soaked wet panties.
She didn't know what she was doing, but she needed someone by her side
to comfort her.

Usagi crept silently tword's Michiru's room and peered through a crack
in the door.  Waiting and wanting. Usagi saw Haruka between Michiru's
legs, flicking her tounge around her pussy. Michiru let out a soft moan,
and grabbed Haruka's head and pulled her in closer.

Michiru's voice muffled from Haruka's long lingering kiss, saying, " I
love you "

Haruka smiled, and began to move her tounge away from her's to explore
the rest of her mouth. Haruka tugged at Michiru's panties and they fell
to the ground. Haruka tickled Michiru's belly.

Michiru uncontrolibly moved Haruka's fingers down to her pussy. Haruka
tickled Michriu's clit which sent a tickeling vibration through her
body. Michiru whispered under her breath, " Further... Please.. "
Haruka took her index finger and slowly inched it up Michiru's pussy.
Michiru gasped and began breathing rapidly. Haruka now took one other
finger and moved it up Michiru's shivering body.

Haruka didn't want to play anymore, her love for Michiru was too much.
She quickly pulled her fingers out and moved her mouth over Michiru's
pussy biting her clit. Michiru screamed in pleasure. Usagi was watching
all this, panting rapidly like she was with them. Making love.

Michiru grabbed Haruka's head and forced her tounge inside her slit.
Michiru stopped sucking for a moment. She heard Usagi's hard breathing.


" Why did you stop? " Michiru said

" I hear someone... "

Haruka peered out the door, and saw a glimpse of Usagi as she tried to
hide.

" It's Usagi.. "

" Oh, let her in.. "

Haruka, nude, wet from top to bottom finally spotted Usagi and dragged
her inside.

" Usagi, I found you "

Usagi blushed, and slowly removed her robe exposing her 2 pulsating
breasts that seemed to shoot out twords both of them. Usagi smiled once
more, winking at Haruka that was beginning to move her fingers up twords
Usagi's breasts.

Haruka being the aggressive one, forced Usagi down on the ground placing
one hand on her breast, while nibbeling on her right nipple.

Michiru decided to join in and got off the bed with her viberator in
hand. Michiru spred Usagi's legs apart, then lifted them on top of her
shoulders. Now, Usagi was spred out like a ramp. Michiru grinned, while
spreding Usagi's pussy open with her fingers then diving in her with the
viberator on high.

Usagi moaned loadly.

Haruka moved away from Usagi's tits and digged her fist inside Usagi's
ass. Michiru took the viberator out, and moved her mouth over her pussy
drinking all her cumm that seeped out.

Haruka and Michiru started hearing voices around the house, people were
waking up.

" Shit! We don't want them to find out! "

" No we don't.. Usagi get back to bed! "

" Alrite... some other time. "

Usagi giggled and walked back to her room happily.


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