Hmmm... not bad, not bad at all. On it's own, it's kinda shaky; it could
use... well, something, an ending scene or something, just to give a sense
of closure. I rather enjoyed it, and I'd really want to see more developed
from this, esp. your ideas on Mousse's new living situations and the
changes in his life. 

Now, if I could only get OTHER people to be interested in working on their
Blueseed fics *coughcoughLurkercoughPMasterscoughcough*

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