I posted Chapter 4 of 'Jusenkyo's Curse' a few days ago and to date have
only recieved little to no C&C on the chapter. I thank all who have offered
suggestions for the team roster but can i get some C&C on the chapter
please? ^_^ I need some input so i know what to and not to do in future
chapters.

Thanks ^_^


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