The Writer Formerly Known as Ryoucilo <bogue@oak.negia.net> wrote:
I don't know if I should release this to FFML. What do you think?
I think it's a little late to be asking.
Well, what can one say about this story...
1) There's a definite Jeff Rutsch quality to it.
2) You really oughtta learn how to do paragraphs.
3) Oh my!
4) It's "eavesdrop," not "ease drop."
5) Oh my!
6) I am NOT a pervert!
7) Okay, I am a pervert, but how did you know?
8) You are truly a crazy man. Keep up the good work!
Gary Kleppe
http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe/comics