-----Original Message-----
From: Gary Kleppe <KLEPPE@execpc.com>
To: shihlin@pacific.net.sg <shihlin@pacific.net.sg>
Cc: ffml@fanfic.com <ffml@fanfic.com>
Date: Monday, March 09, 1998 10:43 AM
Subject: Re: [FFML][Fanfic][X-over]
David Johnston <rgorman@telusplanet.net> wrote:
'Why does he seem so tired?' Again Akane jumped to the easiest
conclusion, and the wrong one as usual. 'Oh! I bet he spent all night
with that.....WOMAN!'
"RANMA NO BAKA!!"
My, it certainly does make it easier to pair up Ranma with someone else
when Akane is depicted as a total maniac.
It does indeed; it's a time-honored approach to a difficult problem.
Though if I were going to write such a story, I think I'd go for the
more believable approach of killing Akane off in the beginning.
But Akane usually *does* jump to the wrong conclusions. However,
I think she waits until Ranma actually puts his foot in his mouth.
It might help the scene a bit if Akane actually asks Ranma where
he's been. Ranma can make his standard lame excuse, insult
Akane in the process, and *then* she can throw him out of the
building. ^_^
-Anand
Gary Kleppe
http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe/comics