At 11:02 PM 3/5/98 -0600, The Eternal Lost Lurker wrote:

As I said, I'm taking a shot at this one. This is *very* rough, and
there's not much to C&C yet. Let me know what you think; I'll be
writing more of this tomorrow.

Hrm.  Interesting premise, though since it is basically based on a play on
words, I don't think it has much room to expand outside comedy...maybe. I
dunno.  (It's early.)  Hrm.  I like Asuka's reaction, but hopefully it will
expand in different directions...even by the end of this sample I was
getting a bit tired of her bit.  But ah well.  Cool idea; like you said,
not much to C&C yet, so I'll lay off.  ^_^

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