On Thu, 5 Mar 1998 15:51:36 -0800 (PST), you wrote:

As promised, here is Part Two.  I hope you like it as much as you did Part One!

Coutuva.

Wow, that was a good story. Really jam packed with emotions. It was a very good
read. Even though Junko died, it would be nice that she was alive by the end of
the story. I kinda liked her. No, not because she's a lesibian...but then again,
any girl likin' another girl seems to peak my interest ;) Anyhoo, I really
enjoyed readin' that story. I kinda feel sad that Junko had to die in order for
Ranma and Akane to get a bit closer together, but then again, that does seem
very reasonable considerin' how stubborn Akane is and how much of jerk Ranma is
;) You should combine both parts into one larger one. Unless you didn't write
the second part until after you posted the first, I see no reason why this story
had to be in parts in the first place. It seems better as a whole IMO. I liked
the part where you referred back to the significance of Akane havin' been on the
roof with Ranma. At first, I didn't really understand why that scene was in
there in the first place, but when I read about it later on in the story, it
sorta clicked. It's strange comin' from me about scenes that didn't fit or don't
need to be there because I write waaaay too many of those in my stories....

-OneShot
Jeffrey Keith Wong: jeffwong@li.net
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