"Donny" <chengdo@shaw.wave.ca> wrote:

I don't know where this came from.  The idea just came to me as I was
looking over my old stories.  I tried writing it in a different style as
the first, so I don't know how it will be recieved.

I liked it. We really got to know "Sayuri Jr". It was a very nice piece
of writing. A few grammatical errors (let me know if you want a list),
but clean for the most part. Worth continuing if you have somewhere to
go with it.


Gary Kleppe
http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe/comics