At 01:28 PM 3/4/98 -0500, Nightman wrote:

My first 'fic for either Ranma 1/2 or Oh! My Goddess.
Be gentle!


Atonement
A R 1/2 / O!MG crossover
by Nightman

*GRIN* I really liked this one, and hope to see more like it. 

Buuuut... there's just one thing...

Ryouga looked at Ranma and smiled. Ranma grinned back, 
hopefully. Ryouga turned to Peorth and said, "Wow, this is 
great! A wish of my own! I wish I had a fianc� of my own 
just like you!"

There was a flash of light, a roll of thunder, and the sound 
of Peorth and Ranma both yelling, 
"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

When I first read this I thought you had written something even more evil.
How about, rather than have Ryouga look at and mean Peorth, have him look
at *Ranma*, meaning he'd like a fiancee like Ranma has like, oh, say Akane,
but instead have the wish give him *Ranma* as his fiancee instead. 

Well, ok, *I* thought it was funny!

The End

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Scott Pollert [pollerts@hsonline.net]