Subject: Re: [FFML] [fanfic][megacrossover][DARK!!] Eternity's Tears, Book I Chapter 1
From: "Eric Adams" <eda104@erols.com>
Date: 3/4/1998, 8:56 PM
To: "Jessica Faith Hardy" <jhardy@campbellsvil.edu>, <ffml@fanfic.com>

Sarah: woo hoo! Good someone else has to save the world.  I'm free!  Its
not up to me.

Dim: good god are you egotistical

Sarah: *flicks a green fireball at the cloud*  comes with the territory.

Eric: mmmmm Mysteries of the Sith.... Mara Jade.....

Dim: does he actually stop playing Jedi Knight?

Eric: this force is with me... always!

Sarah: no.

Sarah: either way, the story.

Dim: hey i liked it!  Grim depressing and eye popping special effects!

Sarah: Well it was pretty good i agree but i do have one complaint.

Dim: you arent going to spew fire around are you?

Sarah: no no, i just want to say that I have absolutely no clue who the
hell half the characters were.  Granted i knew who some of them were,
like Skuld and Urd and Belldandy, but i didnt even realize that the
group there had a brother!  I knew who Tsunami was from Tenchi fame, but
thats about as far I got with understanding who is who.

Dim: oh well i happened to know who everyone was.

Sarah: you lie!

Dim:  okay, i do.  I was a bit lost myself.  In such a large crossover
it might be recommended to provide just a little bit of a background on
some of the other characters, even if they arent obscure.  Some small
bit of history to point us in the right direction.

Sarah: I have never seen Sailor Moon nor do i even understand how i
would actually go about owning any of the tapes because i dont know what
to buy!  *sob* its too much for me...  *runs out of the room in tears*

Dim: uhhhh..... well i didnt see that coming.  Her point is valid
though, I was unsure who half the characters were.  For instance the
Kushinaada sounded sooooo familiar but i dont know from where.  A lot of
japanese terms as well and sometimes I got a bit lost in the word flow.
But truly a fun beginning and I look forward to seeing how the story
unfolds.  No complaints on the style or the actual progression of the
story.  Its a good pace and good scenario but like I said i would love
more info on some of the other characters.

Sarah: *sobbing runs across the room behind Dim*

Dim: what the hell?

Eric: Mmmmm... Light Sabers... Lime Green.

Dim: is it just me or am i the only sane cloud around?