Pretty good fic.  The only problem I have (just a personal
preference) is
the introduction of another incredibly overpowered martial artist.  Not
that it can't
work...but, everytime I read a fic with a new superhuman invincible man
I start 
looking for his fatal flaw.  Ranma's is his overconfidence combined
with a complete lack of forsight, Ryoga's is his temper (plus pig
curse), Shampoo's
is her mindless devotion to Ranma and her amazon heritage, Happosai's is
Panties,
(what else?).  Mouse has his glasses, and Cologne, though no real
weakness is
apparent, never fights at all unless she expects to gain something from
it, which is
rare. Thus is almost never a fighter. -- Just my two cents :).
	I like the Nabiki's suitor idea, it isn't done too often and it
has a lot of 
potential, keep it up.

								Cat
(Lesser God of Ryoga Fanfics)

travis.mcintosh@student.oc.edu