Florencio B. de la Merced, Jr. wrote:

The Rain on the Window Pane
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A beautiful, evocative character study.  Excellent descriptive work,
both of tangible and intangible things.

Very well done.

IMHO.

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David Eddy - Senior Consultant, Progress Software Melbourne
dje@progress.com

Screening Coordinator and Subbing Bunny, Melbourne Anime Society
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