Hmm...

This seems like it has a lot of potential, but it feels very... clunky.

Some of the concepts introduced (Hentpire, for instance) seemed to be forced,
and don't mesh well with the flow of the story.

I realize that this is a teaser, so that may change once it's completed, but
it worries me a little.

Also, judging from this scene, it seems like there's not much change, just
"Ranma characters in the Star Wars storyline". That doesn't excite my
interest too much; I know the Star Wars story, and I'm familier with the
Ranma characters. It would be more interesting to read about how the Ranma
characters would CHANGE the storyline if they were inserted into it, rather
than how the story would change them.

Just my 2 pence.

Damien Roc