Yet, not all of his reception was warm.

I inferred that Kaworu is in the same class as Shinji. Rei is in the same 
class as Shinji too right? Since they have the same complexion, you'd think 
the class would be used to it by now. In fact, being downright scared of 
Rei I doubt they'd try anything on Kaworu either.

if he joined with Adam, he would find a way to spare the good of the human 

race. It would >certainly turn out for the better of this world.

Luckily things never reached that point. Or he'd have realised how 
subjective "good" is.

Also, the reason why you don't see that much of the other Children is
that this part of the story is Kaworu's time in the spotlight.

Just this part 9b or the whole part 9? 'Cause if that's the case, you might 
as well rename part 9.

I've always wondered, since Adam was recovered at the Antarctic, yet Lilith 
was stored at NERV, what happened to Adam? Or was it they never found Adam 
at all? Yet why did the Angels attack NERV if that was the case?��