On 28 Feb 98 -itlon at 12:41 -itlon, Jeanne Hedge said-itlon:

This is the (hopefully) final version of "Into the Shadows," a BGC fic
co-written by Andy Skuse and myself. We hope you enjoy it.

Quite well written, and the story--although rather typical of the Bubblegum 
Crisis universe.  At first, I was taken back by the constant shifts in 
the first person point-of-view; after starting over, it gradually dawned on 
me what you were trying to do--rather clever, actually.

I'll reserve an indepth criticism for later; at the time being, I'm finishing 
up the first teaser chapter for Casualty.  Hopefully, Chaos should find its 
way onto the list this month.
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