I sat down earlier to work on ADD chapter 2 when I realized I'd made a small, but very obvious mistake in chapter 1 - in the Ukyou scene.  Ukyou says something to the tune of 'After you trashed the springs I thought you..." and somehow it had slipped my mind that in ADD the springs are very much in existence and play just a *little* role with the hell that is soon to break loose.  I'll make a small change to that scene but I'm not going to repost chapter one for one revision - just thought I'd mention it.

Anywayz, chapter two is due out within 3 days and it is entitled "Hi Apsu, Bye Apsu!".  For those of you that suffered reading the original version - I found a *lot* of stuff to change and add already and I'm not even really into the chapter much.  For those of you that hopped onto the train with Crash-Course With Destiny (soon to be continued) you'll get to see a cameo appearance by Apsu, who plays a central role in CCWD...

	Beware of the pancake, for it is not dead...
Draxonx@Bellsouth.Net

Head like a hole
Black as your soul
I'd rather die
Than give you control