On Sun, 01 Mar 1998 03:33:09 -0500, you wrote:

JLee100441 wrote:

In a message dated 98-03-01 01:30:02 EST, you write:

Overall I've found

 this to be a very interesting story.  my one complaint is that you have
 Ranma's Parent's listed as Deceased with no children on this time line.
 Rather than that you might want to consider having them deceased in the
 second impact.

I thought about doing that, but I wanted a clear differance between the two
worlds.

  Additionally, will you be doing anything with the Tendo's?

 Might be interesting to see the reaction of an Adult Nabiki, Akane, &

Kasumi

 to meeting a young Ranma who has absolutely no memory of any of them.  I
 look forward to seeing where you go with this story.

I've been trying to come up with ways to bring some of the other Ranma cast
into the story. Prefrably the Tendo's from Ranma's time.

Some of the ideas I have thought of or have gotten thourgh C&C  include:

There's a Demon/Dojo Destroyer that only Ranma can destroy.
Colone helps so she can get Shampoo's Airen back. (They don't care about
Ranma's haritage.)

Happosai wants his Ranma-chan back and send's Soun, Akane, and Pantyhose.
("Bring back my Ranma-chan and You'll get your new name.")

The PI made a mistake and now the wedding is back on. Once they find Ranma.
Once again Colone helps. (So she and Shampoo can get Ranma back.)

Of course with all of the above Ranma still doesn't remember them. If he goes
with them is quistionable.

Got any other ideas? Anybody?

Sure,

 Maybe after many days, Akane will regret that Ranma was absent.  After>all
at first she wanted to go with Ranma, but her sisters and dad had talk>to her
to change her mind.  And Urd can possibly see that and send Akane where>Ranma
is (with or without her consent ;) ).  Just one idea in passing...

I think an adult Akane should meet up with the young and amnesiatic Ranma and
Ranma will show no feelings toward her what so ever. Not even her presence or
her calling him an idiot will cause him to get flashbacks. That should be her
suffering, that Ranma will never know or remember her

  I like very much this story.  You write faster then much authors and
I can
read it without too much delay :) 

Yeah, but how long will it keep up before it gets overwhelming ;)

  Continu the good work!

Salut bien !

-OneShot
Jeffrey Keith Wong: jeffwong@li.net
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