At 18:44 2/25/1998 EST, UkyouKwnji@aol.com wrote:

ukyoukwnji@aol.com

This story's a little different, and maybe a little dark... I dunno.

Anyway, all the characters belong to Kosuke Fujishima this time, and 
no offense is intended.

By the way, I'm not too thrilled about the title.  Any suggestions 
before I send this to the r.a.a.c.?

The title is actually pretty good.  Keep it.

DAME FORTUNE LAUGHS
an Ah! My Goddess fanfiction
by Ukyou Kuonji

The older girl rolled her eyes, with an expression of 'you-don't-get-
it-do-you' "No, she's gone home... to be with Keiichi.  Home to be with 
our Father."

The phrase sounded vaguely Christian, like a Western euphemism for...
no!

Toshiyuki Aoshima's eyes glazed over, and he staggered from the temple 
grounds, grief-stricken.  Somewhere in the distance, he heard the 
mocking laughter of a woman, a cross perhaps between Sayoko and Urd. 
It must be Dame Fortune herself, he thought to himself, as he ran 
desperately into the night.

Great ending!  I like the way you leave a bit hanging and don't show what
happens to Aoshima (whether he commits suicide or not, whether he runs into
Belldandy again or not, etc.)