You know, I've always wondered what Moiraine would
be like if she showed her emotions.  I think you did a good
job of it, it must have been difficult to write.  (I for one would
have a hard time extrapolating that far)  ^_^  

I thought the bonding was plausible give her background, but
she seemed to be a bit more altruistic and kind hearted than
I would have expected.  Why isn't she trying to get back home?

<WOT SPOILER>



Moiraine was under the impression that she would die with
Lanfear, so she had accepted it and given up, so to speak.
To find herself alive, and having met goddesses, I think she
would at least asked if there was anyway for her to return.  Her
whole life was devoted to Rand, and his quest is far from finished.

At any rate, I liked the story, a lot!  (Please do Sailor Pluto next!)

Oh,  I was also wondering if you were going anywhere with
the whole Angel/Goddess thing...  Is there a purpose there?


-Anand