"Evangelion:  Noun.  1.  German word for "angel".

	Um. No.
	The German word for "angel" is "Engel".
	"Evangelium" is German for Gospel (as in the Gospels of Matthew,
Mark, Luke, and John), which was what Anno and Sadamoto had in mind when
they came up with the title.

stepped back a bit to avoid a clumsy kick.  "And if your going to try to

						      ^^^^
	Agh. Grammar pet peeve: for this, you'll want to use "you're", the
contraction for "you are", rather than the possessive form of "you".

exertion of trying to hit Ryan, and Ryan had still not made a move.  "Your
going to have to work on that."

	Here too, as well as other places. Look for them.

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	Overall, this has been an interesting piece. I like the
completeness of this future scenario. However, you might want to explain
how things ended up like this...remember, in the original, there were 17
Angels, and that was it (unless you count mankind as the 18th...).

>From Andrew Huang, brought to you by his computer, Oddzilla
Oddzilla says, "Mmmmm...Evanjellydonut...."
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