This is a really interesting 'fic, I think.  Lots of potential, and
a very cool portrayal of Ryouga.  Still, I wouldn't have minded
seeing the events between Ryouga leaving Akari and meeting up with
Ranma again.  I'm very curious as to what Ranma will have to do to
match the power Ryouga's found... what kind of "different path"
could he take?  How about a ki-blast based on annoyance?  I'd be
the strongest person in the world! :D

Anyhow, very good work.  Mostly free of grammatical and spelling
errors.  I do have one nit to pick though.  "Jiatsu" should be
"Jisatsu" if "suicide" is meant as the translation.  Ji being self,
Satsu being kill.

-Deuce