At 04:26 PM 2/23/98 PST, bryan gooing wrote:

It began, as most things do, with a single thoughT, a small twist of 
destany.  Reality is a  gossamer thread that most people never realize 
it excists.  it spreads itsself out into infenaty like the strands of a 
spiders web, diffrent realitys suspended on the threads like morning 
dew.  in this infanet web there are manny earths, each depecting what 
would have happened if destany had taken a slightly diffrent corse.  it 
is on one such earth our story starts.  The people of this Earth often 
bend reality around them, but then, they were mostly ignorant of what 
they are doing.  Alas that such ignorance did not free them from the 
consequences.  Reality, still rippling as a result of the cumulative 
violations.........

	Bryan, you have some nice imagery going here, but it's spoiled by
the sheer number of misspellings, not just in this initial paragraph, but 
throughout the entire fic. I counted at least thirteen misspellings in the
above paragraph alone. I _strongly_ suggest a run-through with a
spell-checker.

	And after that, run it a second time just to be certain.

Authers note: this is still a rough draft but i had to get this out to 
all of you. 

	That's understandable.. but when it's SO rough that you even misspell 
the word 'author', you _really_ need to take that extra moment with the ol' 
spell-check program, okay? Just a suggestion.

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