At 12:30 AM 2/21/98 -0800, david leroy lindquist jr. wrote:

I just read the story you posted on the FFML. I think it is 
perhaps the best pure BGC fic(non crossover, nonself insertion)
ever. 

*_*  Wow!  Thanks!

You wrote just enough of each characters
personality to give us a hint of what they will become
in the future. I also liked the rotating first person
viewpoints and the flashbacks during the Knight Sabers
first fight. 

Glad to hear it worked well for you. :)

Just one question:In the fic Sylia said that
she 'had to nudge one of them to make her a little more receptive
to her proposal.' Which one?Did she sabatoging Linna's 
tryout or kill Priss's boyfriend?(I know that the general
opinion would be that she sabatoge Linna but killing 
Priss's boyfriend would make Priss somewhat easier
to recruit. Given Priss's attitude I can't see her
joining the KS with her boyfriend still alive)

That's for the reader to decide  ^_^ <weg>




Jeanne Hedge


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