Not bad... dispite the illogic of the Couples you seem to be
shoehorning together (if Mousse wins Shampoo's heart and hand by defeating
her, I _will_ become violently ill), the overall story is not bad at all. 

	I have some difficulty seeing Cologne crack up over much, and more
importantly I can _easily_ see her going this far while sane if she's
upset enough (her assessment of Ranma's treatment of Shampoo is dead on) 
and sufficently worried about Shampoo's fate otherwise. 

HTG