Subject: Re: [FFML] [C&C] Money Talks |
From: Scott Jamison |
Date: 2/21/1998, 1:15 PM |
To: Gary Kleppe |
CC: ffml@fanfic.com |
On Sat, 21 Feb 1998, Gary Kleppe wrote:
This was a very nicely written story, and I enjoyed it. I think it would have been better, though, if there had been some kind of external reason to trigger the change in Nabiki. In this story it just sort of happened on its own, and one wonders why it never had before.
My guess, judging from the title, is that it was the money itself talking to her mind. Why? Could be a very good question. SKJAM!