Subject: Re: [FFML] [Fanfic][R1/2] Ill Met By Starlight, Chapter 9
From: Mike Loader
Date: 2/20/1998, 1:21 AM
To: Jon Farber
CC: FFML <ffml@fanfic.com>

On Thu, 19 Feb 1998, Jon Farber wrote:
Okay... Gotta say that I saw it coming...  Nabiki was dead the instant 
Ranma crawled out of that pit.  But I found it nicely done, with a 
certain artistic flair.  Heh heh...  Ranma did say that if Nabiki 
interfered, she would take an accidental spill onto the road and be hit 
by a car... Course, the last thing she should see should be Ranma's 
cold, satisfied face mouthing the words "Told you so."

Well, we try to keep Ranma's exact mental state and good-evil ratio a
mystery. While many people are undoubtably feeling at the moment that
there's little doubt that he's evil as spit... that was also the general
consensus at the end of Chapter 5, when Ranma had his first 'chat' with
Nabs in the room. By the end of Chapter 6, he was again being viewed as a
possible grey area.

Having him sneer in Nabiki's dying face would give the game away, and
possibly be ooc. ;)
 
As for Akane's reaction to the sparring, I kinda missed that part.  Will 
have to re-read it...  But I have to agree that the only person that has 
any chance of stopping Ranma is Akane.  She is the only one that he 
seems to care about, albeit in a sick and twisted way.

He likes Kasumi.... ;)

Ah, no matter.  I'm still chanting "Go Ranma!  Go Ranma!" while doing 
the Cabbage Patch....

Maybe I am a sick sociopath as well....

Keener, I am getting right on the Suicide Blast thing...  Almost have it 
down perfectly!  ^_-
-- 
JD Farber
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