Well, What can I say?  I like the story so far.  I've only seen some minor
spelling problems.

"Angel" not "Angle"  ["I've been squared," said Shinji.]

I believe that the scientists at NERV have been giving Ranma multiple {tests},
not repeating the same {test}.

Those were the two worst (and multiple) mistakes that I saw.

I do like Asuka's reactions to Ranma (very much like Akane).  Now how will
Shinji react to him?  (Rei will always be Rei.)

Now, for the most important question.  When will you be releasing the next
part? ^_-

James Holzhauer (aka Tobimaro [Ton-chan])
       ---BTW, how much will we be seeing of the Tendo's or Urd in the future?