(Jeez, Bert.  Some of us have midterms to distract us from reading fanfics.)

  Superb story.  However, I thought that Mackie would make more of an
appearance.  Although he is not a Knight Saber, he was there at the
beginning and yet he barely appears outside of his sister's memories. Dr.
Raven gets considerably more airplay. BTW, when did Mackie start peeping on
them?  When did they find out?  

 
                                                                     dml