I've recently (ie yesterday) gone and read all of the previous
chapters in this story, and I must say, I'm much impressed. This
chapter in particular stands out in my mind, largely because of the
final confrontation between Ranma and Nabiki. I *really* liked the
bit with the talk-request... I didn't see it coming at ALL. Really
nice work with the 3rd-person limited perspective, focusing on Nabiki.
I would particularly like to see more interplay between Ranma and
Ukyou... especially how he will react to her little secret. Keep up
the stellar work. I am really looking forward to future chapter(s?).
-Deuce