Subject: Re: [FFML] [Fanfic][C&C] Ill Met By Starlight, Chapter 9
From: Deuce
Date: 2/19/1998, 10:50 AM
To: ffml@fanfic.com

I've recently (ie yesterday) gone and read all of the previous
chapters in this story, and I must say, I'm much impressed.  This
chapter in particular stands out in my mind, largely because of the
final confrontation between Ranma and Nabiki.  I *really* liked the
bit with the talk-request... I didn't see it coming at ALL.  Really
nice work with the 3rd-person limited perspective, focusing on Nabiki.
I would particularly like to see more interplay between Ranma and
Ukyou... especially how he will react to her little secret.  Keep up
the stellar work.  I am really looking forward to future chapter(s?).

-Deuce