Hey! Wait! I too have some couple of ideas for the next part...
Well, first of all... it would be good if Ifurita gets to talk to all three
goddesses first without Makoto around. Certainly would be great in terms of
potential possibilities for complications not to mention more ideas on what
Urd could do to lend a hand.
Hmm.. for Skuld-chan.. welll, we could always get her to ask if she could
examine Ifurita and see if she could do some tinkering considering her
instruments have detected some anomaalies....
Well, for Bell-chan.. she'll probably invite her and Makoto for dinner...
What else....
Barry, you could also put in Mara quite early... possibly right in the next
chapter... after all demon goddesses and demons must be able to feel on
another.. ^_^ [Err.. sorry for the pun] Actually, you could put in Mara and
do some crazy things like make Mara and Ifurita talk about their lives and
stuff... I've always personally wanted to make Mara into a nice demon...
Tee-hee...
So, if you want more, I'll be around.. Do try to keep in touch, Barry.
After all, I only have barely a handful of pre-readers left.. *sigh*
Until next time, Barry.. don't take another year to finish chapter two.
Even demon goddesses have limits to their tempers. ^_^ Bye-Bye!!!
Radler
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