Subject: Re: [FFML][Story][OMG/El Haz] Happy Ever After...? (Prologue and Part 1)
From: Chris Davies
Date: 2/17/1998, 9:37 PM
To: Barry Cadwgan
CC: fanfic mail list <fanfic@fanfic.com>

On Wed, 18 Feb 1998, Barry Cadwgan wrote:

Happy Ever After...?
			====================

One story ends.. another begins.  There's always a day after.


	And there was much rejoicing!  Great work, definitely lives up to
the preview.  I can't wait to see more!

	If I have one objection, it would be to Skuld's characterization of
Ifurita as "kawaii mecha".  Now, I'm helplessly in love with her, but I
don't think she's "kawaii".  "Kirei" or "pretty" suits her much better,
frankly ...

	OTOH, Skuld could be looking beneath the superfices, and something
in her internal mechanisms could be "kawaii", I suppose ...

Chris Davies.