"Several motor pool staff received minor injuries, and Lieutenant
Mukatsu, who was nearest to the explosion, received severe burns and a
concussion. He was rushed to sickbay. The military police were summoned
and the accused was placed under arrest."
Overall, this was quite good. I only had one problem.
Since the action was taking place on a base (not a ship) I don't think they'd
use the word "sickbay".
Damien Roc
I wasn't sure what the term is for a medical facility in a ground forces
base. Hospital? Clinic? uhhh... Dumping Ground? I know that there are
military hospitals, but are there smaller emergency medical facilities on
military bases?
Mike
msimmons@bcgroup.net
http://www.geocities.com/Tokyo/Garden/2506