"Several motor pool staff received minor injuries, and Lieutenant 
Mukatsu, who was nearest to the explosion, received severe burns and a 
concussion.  He was rushed to sickbay.  The military police were summoned 
and the accused was placed under arrest."

Overall, this was quite good. I only had one problem.

Since the action was taking place on a base (not a ship) I don't think they'd
use the word "sickbay".

Damien Roc