"Several motor pool staff received minor injuries, and Lieutenant 
Mukatsu, who was nearest to the explosion, received severe burns and a 
concussion.  He was rushed to sickbay.  The military police were summoned 
and the accused was placed under arrest."

Overall, this was quite good. I only had one problem.
Since the action was taking place on a base (not a ship) I don't think they'd
use the word "sickbay".

<nodding>  Probaby should be either "infirmiary" or "hospital" (which is
perfectly appropriate).

-- Bob

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