Hmm... not bad, not bad at all. Hell, I was just happy to see a BlueSeed
fic out there! =^_^= I think it would probably be better with the first
part cut out, something more along the lines of a short origins-of-the-TAC
type fic. At least now I know what that darn white Kusanagi-doll thingy
was in Momiji's window in vol. 5's Omake theater; I think I'll make myself
one of those..... Anyway, it would be interesting to see a series of fics
like this, showing how each of the TAC members came to work there.
*groans* Now I'm ramblin' and the change in the weather's givin' me a
headache. Good fic, well done.
Jess, the LilTigre =^_^=