Subject: Re: [FFML] C&C responses to ch 2
From: "The Eternal Lost Lurker" <EternalLostLurker@WorldNet.Att.Net>
Date: 2/15/1998, 2:30 AM
To: <fanfic@fanfic.com>, "Adam Brown" <van077@imag.net>

Okay, okay, I get the message.  <wry grin> dump the rape scene (I
was
planning to use it in later episodes for bonding purposes between
Akane and
Patricia) it's even more unpopular than the last.  The rest of it
seems to
be okay as far as the comment go.  This is the last time I use a
plot that
I thought up very late at night! <grin>

Dump it? I think not. I personally found it to be a very interesting
turn of the plot. Although it's a bit odd that a gang would rape a
Gargoyle...they were probably so drugged up they didn't care.

P.S.  I am *not* taking it seriously, just to let all you ppl know
and I do
*not* hate you all for disliking some of my writing even though my
tone in
the message may sound like it.

If you choose to redo chapter 2 again, that's up to you, but I'd like
to encourage you to stick with what you've got. 

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Damn it man, we can't write everything.
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