This fic was excellently done, and nicely written.  Style's better
than the majority of fics that I've read lately.

But why write a Lodoss fanfic?

This seems to me a waste of time.  There isn't much of an audience for
Lodoss fanfiction, so I think you just wasted your talent and time
writing a fanfic about it.

Stick to Ranma fanfics, Hunter Kid.  You'll notice that you got not
C&C (or very little, if you got some privately) for this fic.  You
know why?  Because it was Lodoss, a little-known series.

Now think back to how well-liked Ryoga 1/2 and Mirror Images were, and
you tell me your conclusion...

-Tarot