This fic was excellently done, and nicely written.  Style's better
than the majority of fics that I've read lately.

But why write a Lodoss fanfic?

	Heyheyheyheyhey!

This seems to me a waste of time.  There isn't much of an audience for
Lodoss fanfiction, so I think you just wasted your talent and time
writing a fanfic about it.

	!

Stick to Ranma fanfics, Hunter Kid.  You'll notice that you got not
C&C (or very little, if you got some privately) for this fic.  You
know why?  Because it was Lodoss, a little-known series.

Now think back to how well-liked Ryoga 1/2 and Mirror Images were, and
you tell me your conclusion...

	Hold up here. I posted something a while back: write what you want
to write. Sure, you may also be trying to please some readers, but when
you write, you are doing something for yourself. And if he wants to write
Lodoss, let him.
	And besides, who's to say that there's not _future_ in RotLW fics?
Hunter Kid may be, here and now, pioneering that series' introduction to
the fanfic world. He'd be, how should I say, the Daddy of Lodoss War
Fiction, in some time.
	Or maybe not. But it's his choice, and if he gets some enjoyment
out of writing it, let him.

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