It's a truly great fic. I'm giving you nine, Mr. Cobb.
[ you know what happens next don't you]

Um, a favorable review is the kiss of death, right?

Actually the new title is "Urusei Megamisamaa!" (Too many other writers
were crowding around "Chaos and Death").

The new title is a five-way pun.  ("Obnoxious Goddess!" I'll give you for
free.)

I intend to take the story all the way to the first chapter.

I'm quite surprised that nobody has spotted either one of my villians
yet.  (I'm not being very original here.)

There's another UY-derivate story that I need to review, but Shiko is
sulking ever since she got thrown off the Project A-ko Mailing List.

	Henry J. Cobb	hcobb@slip.net          http://www.io.com/~hcobb
    She was flawless, just like a china doll.
    Wherever she went, it was pottery in motion.