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From: Elsa Bibat <aerolbj@epic.net>
To: 'ffml@fanfic.com' <ffml@fanfic.com>
Date: Wednesday, February 11, 1998 1:37 PM
Subject: [FFML] Synopsis List Review

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Title: Rift Asunder
Series: Ranma 1/2 and Many others...
Genre: Science Fiction/Martial Arts
Author: David Snider aka KnightHawke

Apollo: Big....
Lavender: Really big.....
Apollo: No grammar problems from me. Though I think
          I missed some since I was too damned concerned
          of finishing the fic in under two hours.
Lavender: The story has that distinct....you know .... I can't
              put my finger on it. Anyway, storywise and all that
              the fic is good. But I have to reread it just to make
              sure....the current rose number is six, Mr. Snider.
              Ask us again in a few days, maybe I'll give it a nine.
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Gomen...It was large since I was working on it for almost a year now and there
were some earlier parts that I wanted to iron out before I release the entire
thing. Though now, the next parts witll be MUCH smaller than the initial eleven.
Yek...I never really expected it to get so damned large so quickly, add on top
of that I have at least three sides, a pair of lemon side stories (Down
Lavender!!), and a sequel with its own sides and whatnot in the works....I don't
have a small project now do I? -_-;;
Anyways! I REALLY appriciate the positive C&C, just what I needed to get the
creative juices flowing (in a BIG river sense) again...<Prostrates himself>
Arigatou, Arigatou, Arigatou, Arigatou, Arigatou, Arigatou...I think that is
enough...ya'think? ^_-

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