I have to say I found the ending of this a bit dissatisfying. I expected
to see some sort of resolution that showed the limitations of The Plan,
and when that never came, it felt kind of anti-climactic to me. The Plan
is a cool idea, but I really can't see it being a panacea for Ranma and
Akane, if that's how we're supposed to interpret the ending.

Anyway, the story was nicely written, and certainly showed a lot of very
good character insight.

Now, if you were to continue it in a sequel.... :-)


Gary Kleppe
http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe/comics