At 17:49 -0400 2/5/98, Philip C. Mak wrote:

Wow, its finally here! :)

Aheh heh heh...

I really enjoyed it, although the tension between Ranma and Nodoka might
have been a bit much (then again, I've read "Paint It Black" and "Purple
Haired Destiny" so you can see where I'm coming from ^_^).

Well, Nodoka's next mission is the production of Panda Fillet. ^_^

It might be different in the manga, but I think there is a small loophole
when Ranma explains how he'd lead Ryouga to the lunch hall (which takes a
while) and then all the good stuff would be usually gone:

The first time, the cafeteria serving person tossed the bread up in the
air. Ryouga leapt at it, and it looked like he would get it when suddenly
Ranma used Ryouga as a springboard, and got the bread. Ryouga asked Ranma
who he was (which indicates that they did NOT know each other back then).
Its a bit weird that Ryouga doesn't get the good bread. Ranma may be
better than him, but he should still be able to get the bread before the
other people in the cafeteria do.

Oooops.  Quite so.  Oh, well... it's a minor point at best...
Though you're right... Ryouga and Ranma ought both to be able to be at
the HEAD of the line... ^_^;;

Its nice to hear that you will make the later sections less angsty, and
more warm&fuzzy. :) Could I persuade you to have a scene where Ukyou
and Ranma-chan (not Ranma-kun) kiss? :)

(!)  Sukebe!  (It'll be a while, but Zen is willing to bet that it'll happen.)
^_-

Thanks for the comments!


Zen no Itan-sha
Apprentice to the Angels of the Apocalypse