That's it.  Whad'ya think?  Am I good or am I good...or am I pathetic?
Well, at least you got this far.  I'm just rambling now, it's very late
and I should be in bed so forgive my pointlessness.

                        Cat  (The Lesser God of Ryoga Fanfics)

Hehe, this is really good for a 'first fanfic', at least, in my opinion.
I'm sure the basic idea has been done a hundred times, but i never read
the others. If you'd like, I can do some prereading for you on the
chapters to come. And oh yeah, put your email address on everything you
write, so replies dont have to go through the FFML.

Draxon-X@bellsouth.net