What I Did Not Like: 
	Some of the technobabble in the first portion came off as _really_
bad. 
	I think you should push the second date up to 2033 or '34 unless
you want to play with the original BGCrisis storyline considerably.

What I Did Like:
	Everything Else. ^_^

	Carry on, this is most excellent.

HTG (Excuse me go over Chris' and Jeff's little foray into madness)