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From: Curtis Dubreuil <dubreuil@icanect.net>
To: hayesman <hayesman@eden.rutgers.edu>
Date: 20 January, 1998 11:37 PM
Subject: Re: [FFML] Artist needed!!!!!!!


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|From: hayesman <hayesman@eden.rutgers.edu>
|To: Curtis Dubreuil <dubreuil@icanect.net>
|Date: 20 January, 1998 7:45 PM
|Subject: Re: [FFML] Artist needed!!!!!!!
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|OK, here's characters, the main character Rage is a immortal who is billion
|of years old. But acts a little immature and is also some times is very
|sarcastic. He likes being around mortals and since his mother was mortal he
|calls it getting to know his roots. But really thinks that mortal are more
|fun than some old and stalel immortals. Since he like being around mortal
so
|much he has been to many different dimensions and has learned many thing
|from many other species. Infact Rage was the first immortal to discover owe
|dimension over 100 thousands years ago. He has knowledge of many forms of
|fighting, and is a master at magic. he also has learned science and
|technology from other races, which is something not to many immortals do.
he
|is very strong, and his physical abilities are twenty times that of are's.
|his genetic code if more advance and complicated than are's.
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|Rage's teacher and the one who raised his since he was 20 is Osiris. Osiris
|is an angel of death who through a magical cast by another wizard who's
life
|force he was going to take was given a soul. Since he has a soul he relized
|that all the killing he has done over countless years was very wrong and
has
|tried to make up for his crimes against mortal kind by teaching heroes to
|persevere innocence and not to destroy it. But to destroy those who would
|destroy innocence. Osiris is not very popular with the other immortals and
|lives isolated and from others. his home is in the shadow lands. An are in
|Rage's decision in which light never shines on. And he lives in the black
|church which it got it's name because it looks like a big cathedral made of
|black marble.Since Osiris's power is that of death and death over years
does
|not gain any power so he is not as powerful as other immortal. And what he
|lacks in power he makes up in wisdom and cunning witch he teaches to his
|students. And ever though he is not  that powerful immortal that are
|stronger still fear him and wish that he never come looking for them.
|Osiris's role in the story is more of a sense or elder character. who
|sometimes shows up when Rage might need advise are when real trouble is
|coming.
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|Cauldron is a good friend and fellow student a Rage's she one of the most
|powerful sorcerer there is. and has become one with time and space. she is
|able to see the past, present, and future as well as the fate of ever
mortal
|she comes in contact with. She and Rage used to have a relation ship but
now
|they are just friends. Rage sometimes comes to her for help. and she
|sometimes drops in to see how he is doing. In the story she to like the
|company of mortals and lives not to far from Rage.
|
|Nemesis the devils best student and is a master at the dark arts. Nemesis
|was a very young immortal who fought his way through hell to see the devil.
|The devil being very impressed gave him a living armor made of pure evil
and
|was taught the secrets of reality personal by him. the armor has four
|tentacles with two types of blades on them. They connect in the back of the
|head like a pony tail and can move independently. He is able to take any
|form so and is very clever making him a very dangerous foe. In the story
|Nemesis wants to fight Rage when he was young so to make sure he would he
|killed his first wife. But proved to be a mistake when he was nearly killed
|by Rage in which he almost didn't escape. so from then on he is a little
|more careful about not getting into a direct confrontation with him.
|
|OK that is a few of the main characters and there role in the story. now
for
|the main story line.
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|Now this is were I need help on I have come up with a few story lines but I
|haven't decided. So this is the part that will need the most work and help.
|and the part you and others can get actively involved in.
|
|Fist story line is 15 years in the future aliens in the year 1999 make
|contact (place unknown) with earth. and now 13 years later crime is on the
|rise in (city unknown) and now the criminals are not even human. And since
|the justice system isn't that great a new law informant agency is then
|formed. Having the help from many other alien governments by supplying this
|task force with weapons and technology. any ways this new branch of law
|enforcement has been in use for a few years now. they have just added to
|there forces a new female officer (name unknown). All of a sudden reports
of
|creatures appearing causing mayhem. Throwing bus like they were made of
|aluminum. And shooting energy weapons when they don't even have and type of
|fire are on them. They alien government have never seen these thing before
|and some have theory on what they might be but are quickly dismissed as
some
|wild calms. So they put (unknown female officer) in charge of the
|investigation. And they also give her a partner who will also be working on
|the case a male officer name is Brian and is just a little under 20. she
|doesn't like the idea of a partner but really has no say in it. And the
|story really goes on from there at some point it is Reveled that Brian is
|really Rage in human form and by the way Brian is just a name he had to
come
|up with quick for his fake background which is put on file on the main
|computer network. And Rage tells his partner who he is and what these thing
|are and we go from here.
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|Now the second story line is based on a collage in (place unknown) were we
|start with a female student who isn't real popular. One day a group of
|immortals come to the collage posing as students some are vampires, some
|demons, and the others are immortals like Rage and a few others.
|And Rage takes a licking to her and they become friends. He helps her to
|become a little more confident and brave and teaches her some magic and
some
|facts about immortals. and really the story revolves around the town the
|collage is in but Rage really goes all over the globe and takes(the unknown
|girl) with him. they also split the rent for there apartment which is some
|old building were some of the other immortals live in it too.
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|this story line is more colorful and a little bit more to the brighter side
|of life. In this story line there is room for comedy and some real good
|action parts. Were on the other hand the first is a little bit darker and
|will still have humor but will probably be a little off color. and it will
|be a little bit more violent but will have a lot of action in it and people
|getting there butts kicked.
|
|Well there you have it a quick summery of what I have. and I have a million
|more ideas if you need any more info just ask. Remember just give any thing
|that might help my story for as you can see my story lines needs some work
|and your going to have to help me with those things. Also what will be
|needed is some character design of the two female's in the story and
clothes
|and costumes design.
|Some design of space ships weapons alien races. and background design. so
we
|still have these things to work on.
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|Jonathan.........
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