"Philip C. Mak" <pmak@cs.dal.ca> wrote:

Always glad to C&C well-written fics with interesting storylines. :)

Which is all well and good, but why do I have this sneaking suspicion...

Of course, sweet Ucchan who would do anything for her Ranchan.

Yup. How did I guess there'd be something like this? I must be psychic.
:-)

(Save it
Gary Kleppe-san, I am allowed to rant a little aren't I? :)

While only White Wolf and Tybalt can decide what you're allowed, it's my
personal opinion that you passed "a little" roughly six hundred posts
ago.

Grow up.


BTW, as regards some of the actual C&C in this post...

	He shook his head and touched the hand of his doppelganger.

'Doppleganger' is the correct spelling I believe.

Wrong. It's doppelganger. (Checking your dictionary would've told you.)

BTW, I think you spelled Ryouga's attack wrong. "Shishi Houdoukan", not
Houkoudan. 

Wrong again. It's houkoudan -- or hokodan if you don't use the extra u
romanization.


Gary Kleppe
http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe/comics